After looking at my 6th draft I have realised that the background is too dark and needs to be lighter. I think I will put a faded black to grey background in instead of a plain black one. When I printed the page I realised that the there wasn't enough text and the text was also too large.
As well as these two issues I have also decide on changing the main image as I feel it lacks any skill and is fairly limiting.
In my next draft I will have a complete page with the ammendmants mentioned here.